WARNING! Carry on reading! Or you will die, even if you only looked at the word warning! Once there was a little girl called Clarissa, she was ten-years-old and she lived in a mental hospital, because she killed her mom and her dad. She got so bad she went to kill all the staff in the hospital so the More-government decided that best idea was to get rid of her so they set up a special room to kill her, as humane as possible but it went wrong the machine they were using went wrong. And she sat there in agony for hours until she died. Now every week on the day of her death she returns to the person that reads this letter, on a Monday night at 12:00 a.m. She creeps into your room and kills you slowly, by cutting you and watching you bleed to death. Now send this to ten other pictures on this one site, and she will haunt someone else who doesn't. This isn't fake. apparently, if you copy and paste this to ten comments in the next ten minutes you will have the best day of your life tomorrow.You will either get kissed or asked out, if you break this chain u will see a little dead girl in your room
I really like the style you show here, it's ruff and sketchy but still simple and holds the important details. There is something about the couloring i really like, I think it is the fact that you have some black outlines in the mane and tail, but they don't represent where the couilor's change. The pose is good, mabye a bit standard, and her left back leg is a bit thick in the top. Oh, and the shadowing is really nice.
Have you considered posting on www.reddid.com/r/MLPdrawingschool ? If not, you should, there are some awesome people there who give amazing feedback, and notice errors and awesome things you don't think about when making the pic's. I's really helpfull, you should drop by sometime soon.